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浪費(fèi)食物的原因和解決方案|2023年雅思寫作外教范文#10

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雅思寫作外教范文

今天,給大家?guī)?lái)一個(gè)雅思大作文原創(chuàng)范文。    

 

老規(guī)矩,以下是正文目錄:     


1,題目

2,審題

3,高分范文

4,范文朗讀

5,范文地道詞匯中英對(duì)照,包括:

題目改述
報(bào)告類雅思大作文高分句型
展示“詞匯豐富度”的詞匯&短語(yǔ)
展示“連貫與銜接”的詞匯&句型 

 

 

上題:

 

People waste a lot of food that is bought from shops and restaurants these days. What causes this and what solutions are possible?


審題:

Type:  Report 報(bào)告類雅思大作文 (over-consumption and accessibility)
Body 1: economic ability leads to over-consumption and causes increased food accessibility
Body 2: educate children, affecting parents, and taxing waste

雅思寫作外教范文

 

高分范文 

 

It is a well-known fact that in today’s richer developed societies many citizens tend to waste much of the food they purchase in eateries and supermarkets. This essay shall explore the reasons for this phenomenon, along with discussing possible solutions for overcoming this issue.

 

One of the main reasons for the wastage of food, whether bought in dining establishments or in supermarkets, is the pattern of over-consumption witnessed in today’s societies. This trend of over-consumption is an aberration of economic ability, where one feels empowered due to their economic status, and as such, disposable consumables, including food, lose their utilitarian essence and instead tend to be taken for granted. With increased economic capacity, the culinary market also lends itself as a facilitator to over-indulgence, as the accessibility to food knows no bounds, and subsequently, food satisfying even the pickiest of preferences is made accessible to all citizens, and yet, too much of anything inevitably results in waste, as can be evidenced by the crammed refrigerators of many households.  

 

In order to overcome this challenge, educating the young is probably the best, yet least intrusive method that can be utilized in this war against waste. As commonly recognized within psychology, it is evident that children can actually have a major impact on parents’ shopping patterns, and in this case, even on ordering food at a dining establishment. If a concerted effort is made to educate the old dictum of ‘want not, waste not’, this philosophy will gradually, through osmosis, be transmitted to the parents, resulting in parents taking more responsibility for the food waste they create. A more effective deterrent to wasting food, though more invasive, would be to simply tax households and restaurant-goers on the amount of food wastage they produce.  

 

In conclusion, the attitude of over-consumption, due to higher levels of disposable incomes, seems to be the main culprit for wasting food, whether purchased from grocery stores or within restaurants, and that the most effective long-term solution to this issue is to educate the young that the wasting of food is anathema to acceptable patterns of consumption. 

 

 

- Essay Analysis 范文解析 -

- (1) Introduction 

 

Paraphrasing from the Statement/Question 題目改述:

People waste a lot of food = citizens tend to waste much of the food
from shops and restaurants = they purchase in eateries and supermarkets.
causes = reasons

 

Standard Phrase for the “Report” type essay 報(bào)告類大作文高分句型:

This essay shall explore the reasons for this phenomenon
, along with discussing possible solutions for overcoming this issue

 

Words showing Cohesion (C&C) 展示“連貫與銜接”的詞匯和短語(yǔ):

That
they
This
, along with
for

 

Vocabulary 高分地道詞匯和短語(yǔ):

eateries 餐館
overcoming 克服

 

 

- (2) Body 1 -


Aspects that must be referred to 這段需要提到:

What causes this?

 

Standard IELTS essay phrase 雅思高頻句型:

One of the main reasons…is the


Vocabulary and Collocations 高分地道詞匯和短語(yǔ):
the wastage of 浪費(fèi)
dining establishments 餐廳
the pattern of 模式
over-consumption 過(guò)度消費(fèi)
aberration 偏差;失常
economic ability 經(jīng)濟(jì)能力
empowered 準(zhǔn)許;授權(quán)
economic status 經(jīng)濟(jì)地位
disposable consumables 一次性消耗品
utilitarian essence 實(shí)用本質(zhì)
taken for granted 認(rèn)為……理所當(dāng)然
economic capacity 經(jīng)濟(jì)能力
culinary 食物的
pickiest 最挑剔的
accessible 能得到;能接觸到
inevitably 不可避免地
evidenced by 證明
crammed 擁擠的

 


Words Showing Cohesion [Signposting words, conjunctions, relative pronouns] (C&C) 展示“連貫與銜接”的詞匯和短語(yǔ):
, whether
This trend of over-consumption
, where one
due to their
, and as such,
, including
their
and instead
With
also
, as
, and subsequently
, and yet,
, as

 


- (3) Body 2 -


Aspects that must be referred to 這段需要提到:
What solutions are possible

 

Standard IELTS essay phrase 雅思高頻句型:
In order to overcome this challenge, 

 

Vocabulary and Collocations 高分地道詞匯和短語(yǔ):
intrusive 煩擾的
utilized 使用
psychology 心理
evident 明顯的
shopping patterns 消費(fèi)模式;消費(fèi)習(xí)慣
concerted effort is made 齊心協(xié)力
old dictum 古語(yǔ);格言
‘want not, waste not’ 勤儉節(jié)約;吃穿不缺
philosophy 哲學(xué)
osmosis 滲透;耳濡目染
transmitted to 傳遞給
deterrent 震懾因素
invasive 侵入性
restaurant-goers 餐廳???/p>


Words Showing Cohesion [Signposting words, conjunctions, relative pronouns] (C&C) 展示“連貫與銜接”的詞匯和短語(yǔ):


In order to
probably
, yet least
this
As commonly
, it
that
actually
, and in this case, even
If
, this
gradually
, through
, resulting in
more
, though more

 

- (4) Conclusion -

 

Standard IELTS essay phrase 雅思高頻句型:

In conclusion,

 

Vocabulary and Collocations 高分地道詞匯和短語(yǔ):
disposable incomes 可支配收入
culprit 罪魁禍?zhǔn)?br />grocery stores 雜貨店
effective long-term solution 有效的長(zhǎng)期方案
anathema 詛咒

 

Words Showing Cohesion [Signposting words, conjunctions, relative pronouns] (C&C) 展示“連貫與銜接”的詞匯和短語(yǔ):
, due to
, seems to be
, whether
, and that the most
this
is to

 

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