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1. 仔細(xì)閱讀雅思寫作題目

2. 將自己的觀點(diǎn)思路寫下（進(jìn)階要求是可以完成一篇文章）

3. 參考我們給出的觀點(diǎn)、思路及范文，做筆記以及對(duì)照自己內(nèi)容進(jìn)行修改。

4. 在評(píng)論區(qū)完成打卡，看看你能堅(jiān)持多少篇。

我們相信，只要你能堅(jiān)持一個(gè)月，就能看到提升效果

雅思寫作范文解析

報(bào)告類大作文，社會(huì)類話題

In some societies, the role of a mother differs in some ways from the role of a father. Why do you think these differences exist? How might parental roles develop in the future?

題目來源：2015年11月21日大陸雅思大作文

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題目大意

在一些社會(huì)中，母親的角色在某些方面與父親的角色不同。你認(rèn)為這些差異存在的原因是什么？家長的角色將來會(huì)如何發(fā)展？

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思路解析

這是一道報(bào)告類大作文，聊的是父母角色差異的原因和未來發(fā)展方向。報(bào)告類題目的行文結(jié)構(gòu)相對(duì)簡單，兩個(gè)主體段分別對(duì)應(yīng)兩個(gè)問題，主體段一分析這一現(xiàn)象的原因，主體段二討論未來的可能性。審題的時(shí)候注意，題目討論的是男女差異的原因而非單純差異點(diǎn)是什么。下面月半鴨和大家一起來看下具體觀點(diǎn)。

首先來看產(chǎn)生差異的原因，有兩方面。

一是生理上的差異，女性承擔(dān)了生育和哺乳的功能，意味著母親必須要花更多時(shí)間來照顧孩子特別是嬰兒，而這些能力是父親所不具備的。同時(shí)男性體格更加健碩，更能承擔(dān)體力勞動(dòng)，因此在古代依靠狩獵或農(nóng)耕的情況下，男性承擔(dān)了更多養(yǎng)家糊口的角色。

二是在傳統(tǒng)的父權(quán)社會(huì)或是宗教社會(huì)中，往往使男性處在支配地位而女性處于服從地位，因此在家庭中更多由男性進(jìn)行主導(dǎo)并進(jìn)行工作，而女性則更多留在家中照顧丈夫和孩子的生活起居。

然后再來看未來可能發(fā)展的方向。

隨著教育普及、男女平權(quán)以及工作崗位變化等一系列因素，妻子不再作為丈夫的附屬，且女性可以和男性一樣工作養(yǎng)家糊口甚至賺取更多收入，而照顧孩子的責(zé)任則由雙方討論決定，可以共同承擔(dān)或由時(shí)間更空余的一方承擔(dān)，未來會(huì)出現(xiàn)越來越多男性承擔(dān)照顧孩子的情況。

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提綱

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高分范文示例

The cultural context present in diverse places of the world is deeply intertwined with the differing parental roles found within households. The purpose of this essay is to explore the underlying causes of such divergences and to assess their future possible direction.

In some parts of the world, parenting styles between mothers and fathers differ, but we must examine the cultural context in which these families exist. In certain societies, it is a long-standing tradition for men to venture into the outside world to overcome obstacles and provide for their families, while women maintain order within the household. This dynamic can lead to a situation where fathers focus on meeting their children's basic needs, while mothers take a more holistic approach to their upbringing, from their daily routines to their education and emotional well-being. In essence, while dads are the breadwinners, moms are the heart and soul of the family unit, working tirelessly to ensure their children thrive in every aspect of their lives.

However, the future of parenting in our modern world will undoubtedly be shaped by the clash between traditional values and the innovative ideals that arise from industrialization. Some predict that as women continue to strive for gender equality, they will venture out from under the protective umbrella of men and seize new opportunities, taking on the role of the ultimate caregiver and leaving their husbands to tend to the children. Others believe that as the nature of work continues to evolve, both parents will be able to work remotely and participate equally in child rearing. Despite these exciting possibilities, there are still parts of the world where old-fashioned beliefs persist, and parents will have to break free from outdated conventions to achieve true gender equity in their parenting roles.

In conclusion, the cultural backdrop of certain nations has a significant impact on the divergent parenting styles exhibited by mothers and fathers. As for the evolution of parental roles, this hinges on a complex interplay of societal factors that are yet to be fully recognized.

范文作者：王碩實(shí) & Sophia

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相關(guān)詞匯和語法結(jié)構(gòu)

intertwine   密切關(guān)聯(lián)

divergence   （意見、態(tài)度的）分歧

venture into   冒險(xiǎn)進(jìn)入

Opportunist   機(jī)會(huì)主義者 

Simultaneously   同時(shí) 

Scenario   情況

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