Coherence and Cohesion(簡稱CC)作為雅思寫作四大評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)之一,  大家都不陌生。但實(shí)際來說，很多同學(xué)不真正理解 Cohesion到底是什么（Coherence我們放到以后談）。

根據(jù)官方解釋: Cohesion refers to the way ideas are connected and is usually managed by using linking words.

想必大家都注意到了linking words。不少同學(xué)都誤以為linking 就是把however, on the other hand等過渡詞(transition signals)用上就可以了, 這的確是其中一部分。

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比如在contrasting ideas時(shí)寫上however, 舉例時(shí)寫for example, 引出結(jié)論時(shí)寫in conclusion.

但這不是全部，還包括referencing by using pronouns(代詞指代) 和using substitution （替換）。

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請記住，三個(gè)方面

1. transition signals

2. referencing by using pronouns

3. using substitution

下面是劍橋雅思15第135頁考官對一篇7分文章的評語，可以得到很好的印證。

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今天我們只說transition signals的問題，2和3放到后面再跟大家展開。下面是評語中提到的文章，為了減少閱讀時(shí)間，只給出了一個(gè)段落，段落討論的話題是: advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it.

7分文章

Nevertheless, there is another point of view in which the widespread of advertisements makes it a normal thing. After watching a dozen of advertisements people will see it as a mere everyday routine and cease to pay attention to the message of the advertisement. Some people may even choose to turn off a television channel, for instance, only just to avoid seeing and hearing repetitive advertisements. After a certain frequency, they start to get bored and stop paying attention to ads. Hence, in the end, the main goal of advertisements is not complete since the people whom the messages are sent out to do not receive that message. A real life example can be seen from advertisements in a particular social media platform, Youtube. In the Youtube marketing mechanism, advertisements are place before and between videos, hoping that viewers would also be forced to watch the advertisements, too. However, this is not usually the case, since many people would just click “Skip Ad” and continue on.

大家可以看到，過渡詞的使用是非常充分和準(zhǔn)確的。在雅思寫作中，常用的過渡詞給大家匯總?cè)缦拢蠹铱梢允詹仄饋怼?/p>

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今天先簡單分享到這里，過渡詞是最簡單的，指代和替代我們后面聊。

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