在雅思大作文中，想要讓考官眼前一亮的方法有很多，其中一個較為簡單的方法，就是寫一個好的總結(jié)段（conclusion）。

但是大部分考鴨在總結(jié)段常見的問題是：復(fù)述一遍開頭的觀點，甚至跟開頭內(nèi)容幾乎沒差別...

總結(jié)段要和開頭段呼應(yīng)是沒錯，但并不是讓你復(fù)述一遍開頭提出的觀點。下面小編就結(jié)合具體例子來給大家講一講，總結(jié)段寫作的正確打開方式~

在具體舉例說明之前，首先給大家介紹一下，在總結(jié)段中一定要避免踩的坑，趕緊看看你之前有沒有這樣做過吧！

總結(jié)段注意事項

1.與開頭段首尾呼應(yīng)，但不要重復(fù)觀點

這點在開頭也有提到，結(jié)尾段是對整篇文章的核心觀點進行提煉總結(jié)，而這在開頭段表達(dá)自己觀點時可能已經(jīng)提出。

所以在結(jié)尾段我們要做的，除了使用同義替換詞來轉(zhuǎn)述開頭說的話以外，結(jié)尾還應(yīng)該對觀點進行升華，加入自己的見解在里面。

舉個簡單的例子：

比如題目問你，手機對社會的影響更多是消極影響還是積極影響？

開頭段你可以在簡單轉(zhuǎn)述題目給出現(xiàn)象后，表達(dá)觀點只用一句“In my opinion,the negative influences outweigh the positive ones.”

到結(jié)尾段，除了重申自己的觀點外還要總結(jié)為什么會有這樣的觀點↓↓

In conclusion, while admitting the positive influences of people being able to connect with mobile phones, I personally contend that the downsides are more significant for both individuals and the society, considering the damage to our current life and possible long-term consequences.

2.不要出現(xiàn)新論點

在結(jié)尾段中，還有一點很重要的，就是暗示讀者（即考官）“我已經(jīng)結(jié)束了”。所以結(jié)尾段不要再出現(xiàn)補充論點，甚至直接推翻開頭段所表達(dá)的論點，讓讀者以為你后面還有什么沒寫完的。

結(jié)尾段只要好好重復(fù)開頭表達(dá)的觀點，并總結(jié)主體段的分論點就可以了。

當(dāng)然，想要明確自己已經(jīng)到總結(jié)段，可以使用一些“信號詞”：

1. it can beconcluded that…
2. we can find that…
3. I think it is also important to remember that
4. the main point is to make sure that
5. I believe that/Personally, I think that/ I would say that/ I agree that/ My view is that

3.長度不宜過長，不說廢話

比其又長又復(fù)雜的結(jié)尾段，考官更喜歡簡潔精練的結(jié)尾段。直接單刀直入，2-3句話結(jié)束，點明自己觀點即可。這樣你寫起來輕松，考官看著也輕松~

好了，說完結(jié)尾段要注意的事項，下面小編就以較為常見的三種大作文類型，給大家簡單講講分別應(yīng)該如何寫結(jié)尾段~

總結(jié)段常見寫作思路

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一邊倒型：完全同意/反對題目中的一方觀點 

結(jié)尾段寫作思路：再次重述個人觀點，并總結(jié)前文給出的理由。

舉個例子

題目

Many people say that cooking and eating at home is better for the individual and the family than eating out in restaurants and canteens. Do you agree or disagree?

總結(jié)段

In brief, I believe that eating at home is healthy and clean. If people want to save money, eating at home is also a good choice. In addition, people can cook what they like as well. So I personally prefer eating at home.

02
雙邊討論型：對雙方觀點的優(yōu)劣進行討論 

結(jié)尾段寫作思路：總結(jié)雙方觀點，提出自己的判斷標(biāo)準(zhǔn)和結(jié)論：即傾向于更贊同某一方，還是認(rèn)為雙方應(yīng)互補，或者認(rèn)為雙方都有缺陷，因此應(yīng)該提出一個更合理的觀點。

舉個例子

題目

Many scientists believe that intelligent life forms may exist on other planets and messages should be sent into space to contact these life forms. Other scientists think this is a bad idea because these life forms could be dangerous.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

總結(jié)段

In conclusion, I believe that both sides of the argument are reasonable. On balance, I firmly argue that unclear evidence of extra-terrestrial civilisations makes it neither possible to communicate with these life forms nor meaningful to worry about the assumed dangers. What scientists ought to do instead is endeavour to preserve the Earth for the well-being of current and future generations.

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問題解決型：分析問題/現(xiàn)象產(chǎn)生的原因，提出解決辦法 

結(jié)尾段寫作思路：問題/現(xiàn)象的解決辦法（無需再總結(jié)原因）。

舉個例子

題目

Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is happening? What can goverments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced?

總結(jié)段

I think, therefore, that goverments need to raise this awareness in the general public. Children can be educated about environmental issues at school, but adults need to take action. Governments can encourage such action by putting taxes on packaging, such as plastic bags, by prividing recycling services and by fining households and shops that do not attempt to recycle their waste.

看完之后是不是發(fā)現(xiàn)，其實總結(jié)段也沒那么難寫？只要學(xué)會這些套路，你也能在總結(jié)段中，讓考官頓時眼前一亮！ 

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