寫(xiě)作，作為雅思考試中不可分割的一部分，一直以來(lái)都是困擾各路考生的老大難問(wèn)題；經(jīng)常有朋友和我說(shuō)，閱讀聽(tīng)力考到8了，寫(xiě)作口語(yǔ)還是6，很多同學(xué)也是對(duì)于寫(xiě)作就是一個(gè)棄療的狀態(tài)。

2024年小編依然要說(shuō)其實(shí)寫(xiě)作很簡(jiǎn)單（迫真），但是需要長(zhǎng)時(shí)間的積累和練習(xí)、掌握寫(xiě)作的結(jié)構(gòu)和問(wèn)題的類(lèi)型。千萬(wàn)不要因?yàn)閼谢蛘吲聦?xiě)錯(cuò)而不動(dòng)筆，進(jìn)而慢慢變成躺平的狀態(tài)。下面就來(lái)一起學(xué)習(xí)2024年雅思考試大作文解析吧！

Mobile phones and the Internet are very useful. However, it is rare for old people to use them. In what ways can mobile phones and the Internet be useful to old people? 

What could be done to encourage old people to use mobile phones and the Internet?（2024/5/18——問(wèn)題與解決類(lèi)）

1. 讀題審題、標(biāo)注核心論點(diǎn)

Mobile phones and the Internet are very useful. However, it is rare for old people to use them. 手機(jī)和互聯(lián)網(wǎng)十分有用，但我們卻很少見(jiàn)老年人使用它們。

In what ways can mobile phones and the Internet be useful to old people? What could be done to encourage old people to use mobile phones and the Internet? 手機(jī)和互聯(lián)網(wǎng)在哪些方面對(duì)老年人有用?如何鼓勵(lì)老年人使用手機(jī)和互聯(lián)網(wǎng)?

2. 規(guī)劃結(jié)構(gòu)

1. Introduction：Topic sentence + answer （multiple benefits for seniors）

2. Main body 1：the benefits of technology

3. Main body 2：how can we encourage old people

4. Conclusion：Repeat the answer

3.頭腦風(fēng)暴

the benefits of technology

1. phones can help them with “manual labor”

2. like shopping online or registering for a health check

3. convenient way to communicate

4. Facebook or Skype can help them keep in touch with their loved ones

how can we encourage old people

1. government initiatives

2. Making old people learn the benefits of mobile phones can help them easier to accept new technology.

3. companies should promote products specially tailored for aged people.

4. like larger font or voice modifications.

4. 文章開(kāi)頭

Topic sentence + answer （multiple benefits for seniors）

In such a technological era, despite the significance of using smartphones and the internet, the number of older users is relatively low. Since those gadgets hold various benefits for seniors, I believe that it has become essential to engage them in using the internet.

 
5. 文章主體：（第一部分）

the benefits of technology

1. phones can help them with “manual labor”

2. like shopping online or registering for a health check

3. convenient way to communicate

4. Facebook or Skype can help them keep in touch with their loved ones

（主題句）To begin, mobile phones with internet access help seniors to lead a more prosperous life. once they can fend for their necessities via portable devices, they will not exert excessive physical effort which they cannot tolerate doing at their old age. For example, because of online shopping applications as well as online medical services, they will be able to purchase their needs and register for a regular health check. Another beneficial impact of the internet is that it provides them with a convenient way to communicate. To illustrate, through video calls offered by Facebook and Skype, they could keep in contact with their siblings or children. Thus, seldom do they feel depressed or isolated.

6. 文章主體：（第二部分）

how can we encourage old people

1. government initiatives

2. Making old people learn the benefits of mobile phones can help them easier to accept new technology.

3. companies should promote products specially tailored for aged people.

4. like larger font or voice modifications.

（主題句）Due to the positive effects of cell phones on seniors, governments and companies should motivate them to use those devices. One of the major approaches is launching initiatives to educate elderly people about using the Internet. If they learn how to benefit from their mobiles appropriately, they will integrate them into their lives. As for manufacturing companies, only if mobile companies design gadgets specially tailored for seniors, would not face any difficulty using them. For instance, additional font and voice modifications are needed because many older people have eye and ear impairments.

7. 文章結(jié)尾

Conclusion：repeat the answer（復(fù)述觀點(diǎn)—強(qiáng)調(diào)主題 + 適當(dāng)展開(kāi)）

To conclude, thanks to adding specific features to mobile phones aligned with educating the elderly people about internet usage, they will be encouraged to utilize them for not only their daily needs and medical checks but also virtual communication.

如上，我們利用先前整理出來(lái)的觀點(diǎn)頭腦風(fēng)暴，整合成了文章結(jié)構(gòu)。只需要適當(dāng)?shù)难a(bǔ)充內(nèi)容，我們的大作文就完成啦！

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